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Freedom
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 03:23:57 PM in AEST
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Bird takes to the sky
Wings lift and spread to catch wind
Freedom gained in flight
4-29-07
Laura Horner
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Re: Freedom
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 03:35:13 PM AEST
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aesthetically delightful, a strong poem; even without the picture i would see him fly, you have a brilliant aptitude for these most difficult haikus! you are a joy to read:)
love n' hugs nessa
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Re: Freedom
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by shelby on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 03:51:21 PM AEST
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YOu have such a talent with these, catching the wind sounds like a good thing to do right about now.
Michelle |
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Re: Freedom
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by SilverDagger on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 05:27:51 PM AEST
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| So much expressed with so little. Amazing! |
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Re: Freedom
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 06:43:38 AM AEST
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| ahhhh a wonderfully caught and well worded moment!! |
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Re: Freedom
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 11:20:40 AM AEST
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| ooo! I like this, my fav'" so far. Vincent |
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Re: Freedom
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by Muhammadshanazar on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:07:37 PM AEST
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A nice description of the pic: a bird engaged in fight to discover new destination, it has feedom but alas! Man does not havet, His wings are clipped, He is chained with the chains of boundaries, caste and colour, the same chains separate the loving hearts throbbing across the waters.
Love and peace for my sweet sis.
Muhammad Shanazar
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Re: Freedom
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:28:24 PM AEST
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Quite beautiful quite ironical. Freedom but are we realy ever free, and at what cost. Yet why are we always so ready to imprison our self in the clutches of someone else's say so at a moment's noticed. lovely peice sister laura.
((((peace2ualways))))
Ben |
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Re: Freedom
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by Rescue on
Thursday, 22nd November 2007 @ 01:39:25 AM AEST
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| Very nice! |
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