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Crystal Globe
Contributed by
Spellofnature
on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 12:17:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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It snows every day here
And I’ve never been able to escape it
I’m dressed in an inch of ice
And death is calling for me
I can see you through the glass
Staring at me through these crystal walls
But you can’t wipe these tears
When I’m inside this frozen hell
It’s been five years since I’ve felt your touch
Four since I could feel my own skin
Our love was once like Spring
Mild and full in bloom
But it was like the breeze blew backward
I was thrown into Winter once again
You can shake this globe whenever you want
It will only cause a snow storm in my life
My frozen eyes can do me no good
Behind these crystal walls
My fist does no damage
But I cannot feel my frozen knuckles as they bleed
I need to break free from this
The Ice Queen to my Narnia
I reckon you will twist this globe in your palm
Causing my world to shatter into an icy oblivion
You have the globe, now bring the blizzard!
And as I travel clumsily and cold
I see a red light blinking in the distance
I move toward it
The object is deep in the snow
I dig to reach it and pull it out
It is my own heart I hold beating in my hand
An angry tear forms in my eye
This is one thing of mine you will never have again, I cried
I crushed it in my hand and saw your face looking at me from outside in horror
Suddenly your face was falling, down, down
You slipped and released the globe from your hands
Sending my world spiraling into a haze
But when I landed, I realized the blizzard was over
And my heart was no longer your puppet
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Spellofnature
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2007-04-30 12:17:02]
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Re: Crystal Globe
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 03:58:59 PM AEST
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well, there were two of them and i picked this one: not sure if this is somehow related to that movie, narnia, anyway, i think this was a wonderful poem, i was really worried there for a minute but i see you are now free:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Crystal Globe
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by shelby on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 04:17:08 PM AEST
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Inventive and emotion packed write, I liked it and loved a happy ending after all the hurt and pain
Michelle |
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Re: Crystal Globe
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 06:48:32 AM AEST
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You create such a fantastic vision in this piece!!
I was drawn in and held right to the end.....very captivating!
I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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