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Down Low
Contributed by
WishAndLetGox23
on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 09:30:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You go through life
not knowing about
all the frustration and strife
that was brought down your route
ends up being connected
to the boy of your dreams
that you expected
to rip out the seams.
He loved you since day one,
but you'd never know
and keep living day-by-day
keeping your love on the down low.
And now you're together and there's one thing to say,
"I love you
and you love me.
Be my sweet boo,
and together we'll be."
Copyright ©
WishAndLetGox23
... [
2007-04-30 09:30:24]
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Re: Down Low
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bloodydragon on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 11:52:18 AM AEST
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best to go with the flow when writing, the best writes are the ones that feel right.
Excellent poem i thought, with feelings and visuals. |
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Re: Down Low
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:45:41 AM AEST
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not a bad write for just something coming to you.. it has a good flow.. nice job
vampyress jenni |
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