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Confusion and Dismay
Contributed by
amicus
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Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 12:40:03 PM in AEST
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Confusion and dismay
All this you've made me pay
To God I have to pray
For the chance to swiftly fly away
Waiting for you pleasant return
All this time you've made my heart burn
Hoping you're as great as when you left me
And wishing my love would finally be free
Laying here drowning in tears
How about some more beers
Confusion and dismay
All this you've made me pay
To God I have to pray
For the chance to swiftly fly away
Laying still in the corner
No more blood in any vein
Not even one mourner
All this because of the pain
Confusion and dismay
All this you've made me pay
To God I have to pray
For the chance to swiftly fly away
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Re: Confusion and Dismay
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by Honey56 on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 12:48:52 PM AEST
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Very nice post!
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Re: Confusion and Dismay
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 01:24:32 PM AEST
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Very beautiful poem with easy flow of words...You have penned it with emotions.
My dear friend do you really think beers {or any intoxication} can solve the problem? or wipe your tears? Think about it my friend.
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Re: Confusion and Dismay
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by brew on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 11:25:26 AM AEST
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Great post, but franco is right.it isnt good to drink away the pain.....pain will still be there, and added too.....beleive me, i have done that recently a couple of times....Good post tho
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