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Grey Matter
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 05:26:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Nest of nastiness
Built within the grey matter
Made of gnarling thorns
Penned 4-27-07
Laura Horner
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deadheadpoet
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2007-04-28 17:26:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Grey Matter
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 12:09:05 AM AEST (User
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this is fabulous ! -and the picture is perfect for this beauty!! i love this so much! you write haiku like a delicate butterfly touches a flower, more please:)
love n' hugs nessa
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Re: Grey Matter
(User Rating: 1 ) by needledancing on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 01:07:15 AM AEST (User
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Fantastic..picture plus. I haven't tried much Haiku but it looks great from you.Great job. |
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Re: Grey Matter
(User Rating: 1 ) by Crow on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 10:12:41 AM AEST (User
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Hi my friend, so dark" hope all is good with you, Vincent |
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Re: Grey Matter
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 03:16:12 PM AEST (User
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I feel alot of pain in this.
The pic fit with it perfectly
Michelle |
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Re: Grey Matter
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 12:53:56 AM AEST (User
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Again, Laura, I have to say you are really good at this
style of poem. I never tire of your insight, truth and beauty.
In such few words you have described a torment felt
and suffered through. (Now let's see the flip side of this
grey matter, eh? *winks*)
Wonderful post!
*hugs*
~MG |
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