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Fundamented
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 12:22:52 PM in AEST
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Fundamented
( you can hear it with the above link )
'Tis the poet's roll
two dance with words,
too spin and twist
the weigh their herd,
and altar what they
could be meaning,
change the slant
at witch there leaning,
open I's
directing gazes,
heard the flock
from ware it grazes,
hold and keep
the wolf at bay
with lull a buys
at end of day,
enlighten ewe
in wheys of thought,
ensnare ideas
that won't be cot,
to redefine
watts come be four,
and flecks yore mined
a little moor,
then leaf behind
a sharpened hook,
perhaps yule take
a closer look,
though it is hoped
you won't be bated,
poetic remains
undesecrated,
as knew methods
are invented,
a poet's work
is fun… demented.
~ Nazmythian ~
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2007-04-28 12:22:52]
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Re: Fundamented
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 01:12:37 PM AEST
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| awsome word play..lol...loved it.. |
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Re: Fundamented
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by emystar on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 01:43:39 PM AEST
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Nazzy this is very creative as always.
Good fun.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Fundamented
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 03:27:01 PM AEST
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This was so cool of a "right". Only you could pull this off man...LOL Thanks for sharing.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: Fundamented
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by Dom on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 09:27:00 PM AEST
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A very fun, inventive poem, I enjoyed reading.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: Fundamented
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 01:33:47 AM AEST
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!!!!!yay nazy!!!!!!! to me this sends a strong message that we should slowly gently read poetry to reach a place above and beyond what first appears, and indeed, this poem was so much fun:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Fundamented
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 11:04:56 PM AEST
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| Wonderful as always. Enjoying thoroughly. |
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Re: Fundamented
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 11:20:30 PM AEST
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APPLAUSE!!!!!!!
I love it! I was just doing this the other day with my sister. Though, I was doing it to get on her nerves.
I have no knew knowledge of the smoking grass needs to be cut my hair lip problematic solution for cleaning is better than five washing my car lot of many nuts I am!
On the fly that is all I can do! Anyway BRAVO Nazzy! Bravo! I love word play. There is so much you can do with so little! And you did sew much with so little you are indeed a poet even when you don't Poe it!
BRAVO!
Daniel |
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Re: Fundamented
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by elle on
Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 04:15:05 PM AEST
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| excellent! :) elle |
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