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Changing Blue
Contributed by
crow
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Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 09:55:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Can I borrow your hand
my lover, there is
song of the Spring Finch.
Walk summer meadows
with me,
the day`s changing Blue"
Sun is warming.
We have lived sparing from cans"
when wars moved in..
bounty, when the world
knew Us well.
Lived by love,no question,
held.. not one" regret.
Here in the rays, and warmth
of the day, your hand is pleasing.
I will ask you to love me once more...Vincent
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crow
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2007-04-28 09:55:43]
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Re: Changing Blue
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by DrowningHeart on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 10:57:40 AM AEST
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"I will ask you to love me once more" Wow I love this line...Sigh.
Another great poem, the imagery is beautiful.
Blessed be
D |
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Re: Changing Blue
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 03:30:28 PM AEST
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Vincent,
Every single piece you pen, I think I love. Each one is different, delicate and made with thought and love. I so enjoy your poetry, my friend.
Much peace,
Laura |
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Re: Changing Blue
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by shelby on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 04:12:45 PM AEST
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Dang, I missed ya again. Think I got home a bit late.
This is calming and lovely, very romantic as well. You did a great job with this hun
Michelle |
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Re: Changing Blue
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 07:24:26 PM AEST
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| awww so sweet and lovely |
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Re: Changing Blue
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 12:13:48 AM AEST
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calming to the soul to read, so gentle...
love n' hugs nessa
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Re: Changing Blue
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by needledancing on
Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 11:09:40 PM AEST
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| Well penned...I love the line the day is changing blue. |
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