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i did it mom, i told u i'm no loser
Contributed by
evolon
on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 09:54:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Consumed with my fantasy
of the after life
I lay here seductively
Masturbating my wrist with a dull knife
I imagine when its all done
Who will shed tears
Looking at sleeping pills
I figure at least ten will take me there
Rewinding thought of a time
I never noticed my life
Rests in a cup of bleach
Every lust filled sip
In my wonder I find
For what I seek
Closed my eyes, wondered in to rush hour traffic
Horns flare, tires scream
With every “ watch out buddy” I become ecstatic
Thinking how I wont see it coming
Blood , guts everywhere in hope my death is graphic
Unfortunately every attempt eluded
Those silly bastards
If your to do it do it right
Mother was right I am a loser
For only death attempts I have mastered
Drowning my sorrows in the tub
So much going threw my head
Thinking why didn’t it fall?
Looking at the hair dryer balance on the ledge
Broken bottle in the blender
With shards of ice
I am making a cocktail
“Cheers” to my life
Today I die
Life goes on so tomorrow will begin
Sickly content with the tease of death
But to much of a good thing……..
And all things come to a end
Leave it up to me to R.I.P.
Playing roulette with fully loaded clip
My shaky hand gains control
As the barrow meets my lips
Clean my remains toss me in a box
Its over that’s
it
Copyright ©
evolon
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2007-04-28 09:54:01]
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Re: i did it mom, i told u i'm no loser
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 10:14:39 AM AEST
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hectic and really well paced; really hoping this isn't your final suicide note; cos then none of what I say will be read! Really good write; I thoroughly enjoyed it...
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Re: i did it mom, i told u i'm no loser
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 11:27:47 AM AEST
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definately twisted but a great write...i liked it alot
Lots of Love
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