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my love alone

Contributed by ladyfawn on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 03:55:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems





  • oh, victorian rose, i loved you so well
    bought n' carried you home last spring
    your blossoms smelled so sweet to all
    this year i waited for you to do it again,
    ~*~
    alas, wicked snow storm a few weeks ago
    you waited outside for springs warmth anew
    to save such sweetness, dragged vines inside
    oh, victorian rose, now ive almost killed you!
    ~*~
    6ft high your arms spread, leaves in full bloom
    little buds everywhere, we'd hardly the room
    ah, but you, i loved so, all last summer long
    i wanted you healthy, i wanted you strong!
    ~*~
    somewhat lopsided, for i gave you that bath
    you reside again by the door, out on the path
    im not so patiently waiting to see what you do
    for now it is sticks and more sticks which is you,
    ~*~
    i believe in the morning i shall buy you a friend
    town greenhouse has such a pretty orange rose
    ill plant you together on the footpath by the door
    oh, victorian rose, please recapture your repose!

    §* *§
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    Re: my love alone (User Rating: 1 )
    by Vampirequeen on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 05:24:41 PM AEST
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    that is sooo beautiful Nessa. :)
    very impressive wrote

    hugs


    Re: my love alone (User Rating: 1 )
    by sweetangeluk on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 06:41:00 PM AEST
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    Beautiful maybe root feed would help. A simply wonderful write. Let me know if it blossoms again with your tender loving care

    Much love

    Angelxx


    Re: my love alone (User Rating: 1 )
    by Crow on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 11:29:10 PM AEST
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    Hi Nessa,
    I hope your rose" gains its strength once more, super write. Vincent


    Re: my love alone (User Rating: 1 )
    by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 01:20:08 AM AEST
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    a very beautiful write!! such depth to the imagination.. roses are beautiful. especially red ones hehe.. i really loved this piece great job nessa!!

    vampyress jenni


    Re: my love alone (User Rating: 1 )
    by lovingcritters on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 02:30:10 AM AEST
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    Oh Nessa dear...............
    Your Poetry genius was a call to many of my favorite memories. Roses entwined up the back wall of my home, red roses for all!
    You are so gifted my dear friend,
    May your lovely poetry never end!
    Warm love
    consue
    P.S. Is Crow back?


    Re: my love alone (User Rating: 1 )
    by myheartsvoice on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 12:29:14 PM AEST
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    " i believe in the morning i shall buy you a friend." . . . I know not wheather your more a geinus or an artist, i do know i enjoy your poetry imencely. This is lovely, you paint
    with your pen little masterpeices of pure
    literary exstacy. Thank you

    ((((Nessa))))



    Ben


    Re: my love alone (User Rating: 1 )
    by shelby on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 04:29:27 PM AEST
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    A beautiful portrait you painted once more.
    I hope the rose returns to its full bloom though I somehow know with the touch of your loving hands it will. DId you get the friend?? Send some pics??

    Michelle


    Re: my love alone (User Rating: 1 )
    by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 05:00:52 AM AEST
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    wow beautiful poem from a beautiful poet, this man bow to your excellence, huggs Eddy


    Re: my love alone (User Rating: 1 )
    by Muhammadshanazar on Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 01:39:30 AM AEST
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    The poetess is a keen lover of nature, she being a representative feels herself killer of the rose, the symbol of rose is multi-facet dilemma, we in the pursuit of material gain are crushing the roses, certainly the world where fatal devices are thriving roses are becoming rare, only the poetess laments on the dying species of the roses and all other are ignorant to the encroaching catastrophe. The diction is simple yet it suits to the subject, theme is unusual i.e increasing indifference of humanity to the roses that really make the world a place worth living.
    Love and hugs
    Muhammad shanazar


    Re: my love alone (User Rating: 1 )
    by colinb on Sunday, 6th July 2014 @ 01:46:05 AM AEST
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    you always step up to enougher level Nessa


    Re: my love alone (User Rating: 1 )
    by hauntedscorp on Friday, 10th October 2014 @ 08:07:31 AM AEST
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    Lovely :) It is poems like this that make me want to explore gardening. Flowers are so cheery. An enjoyable read, thank you.


    ~Scorp




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