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Flood
Contributed by
R0b
on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 11:30:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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In the recent days
Things were said
That were not meant
My words become awkward
As my thoughts begin to twist
My mind is not of my own
It’s an infection
That I have no control
I’m losing grip
With what I have
Walking that fine line
But I’m starting to falter
To stumble and trip
With each passing day
I can feel my mind
Begin to slowly rip
A splinting pain
That chills me to my core
The worst part of it is
We’ve been here before…
Copyright ©
R0b
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2007-04-27 11:30:48]
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Re: Flood
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:32:50 PM AEST
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I guess thats the way of reality .
I am sure you will go through that again and again.
anyways short write or not you did great in this piece.
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Re: Flood
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 09:56:03 PM AEST
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There I read it. again I am not sure what to put in this little box. Rob, you did a wonderful job getting it out and expressing what is going on with you inside your mind. I didn't mean to find it and like I said I wasn't going to freak out and I didn't. Because honestly it ***** me off at first but then I just didn't even care and to be honest that isn't what I wanted. I wanted to care. But like you said We've been here before and I sometimes feel like I have nothing left inside to freak out about. Not to upset you or anything but it's happened before and I can only wish that it would stop but that is all you and I'll help and support you however much that I can because I love you Rob. But it is all up to you.
I liked your poem babe. And I am glad that you were able to write one. Your poems are always great and this one was heartfelt and deep. And I would just like to say that I'll love you forever.
Love you
Christina |
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Re: Flood
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by farscape_prophet on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 12:05:06 PM AEST
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| Almost a perfect definition of reality. You did a good job expressing your thoughts and it was very well written. |
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