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A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
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Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 07:30:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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From
the very first moment
i saw you
my view was of more than a
girl,
That
once in a life time some body special
would soon be a part of my
world.
In
the time that it took me to meet you
in my heart i already knew,
forever was just a moment away
all that i needed was
you.
It could have been raining
so what did i care?
your all that mattered to me,
my eyes looked at you and instantly knew
little else did i need to
see.
From
the very first moment i held you
'twas a feeling i'll never forget,
so lost in each others kisses
seduced by the warmth
of our
breath.
Touching and teasing in all the right places
entering each others soul, a climax so pleasing
brought smile to our faces
so much for youthful
control.
Yes
the very first moment i saw you
my heart went from smoke to fire,
a masterpeice done by davince
tittle
" Portrait Of Heaven's Desire. "
Ben
Copyright ©
myheartsvoice
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Re: A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 12:10:49 PM AEST
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Oooooooooo Ben, I have missed you. It is so good to see you back again and your poems of love always make me smile. When I think of loving couples I think of you and your wife. You lucky man. *wink*
Peace and hugs my friend,
Laura |
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Re: A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 12:30:24 PM AEST
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Ben my dear friend this was *gorgeous*
Joan is a very lucky lady to have such a special soul as her husband.
I go all soft and mushy on the inside every time I read your beautiful romantic writings, lol. Your poetry is so uplifting and you can always manage to put a smile on my face no matter how grey my day has been. A big Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry with us dearest Ben~
Much love to you & Joan,
Sue from across the blue~ |
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Re: A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 12:49:17 PM AEST
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Very beautifull and hot in a good way.
Huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 01:43:55 PM AEST
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beautiful
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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Re: A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben
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by shelby on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:02:51 PM AEST
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A heart touching write as always my friend.
Always delighted to read and be refreshed by the romance you create.
huggles from ur pugges (hee hee)
~Michelle~ |
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Re: A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 01:35:38 AM AEST
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a very splendind passionate write.. so heartfelt written.. beautifully written
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 12:25:30 AM AEST
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First off Ben, let me say I ADORE the title. How beautiful.
And the piece .. well .. as always it's just filled to the brim
with adoration and romance. (And how can I resist that
wonderful emotion? I AM the president of HR anonymous
afterall! lol)
Seriously, a tremendous write of lasting love, right from
the start. Your work is such a joy to the soul, Ben. :)
~Breezy |
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