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Your Golden Nuggets
Contributed by
needledancing
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Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 02:05:03 PM in AEST
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Within a heart incased is told, a tiny piece of melted gold.
If left to linger, never released, will harden there “tis told.”
A thousand tears must shed in pain, forgiveness dividends.
Generous with words and deeds and accumulated friends.
Should once you have a hateful thought your eyes will lose their shine.
Perhaps steal moments selfishly or sit alone and wine.
Its very fragile texture with any such disgrace
Will turn that gold to ash and dust and never find its place.
Hold tight that place of golden blood be not afraid to fire
The price of well constructed gold, we finally have a buyer!
Copyright ©
needledancing
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Re: Your Golden Nuggets
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by emystar on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 02:13:11 PM AEST
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Awesome writing, my friend.
Great job, here.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Your Golden Nuggets
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 02:45:50 PM AEST
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This is what poetry is all about such masterpiece.
well done |
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Re: Your Golden Nuggets
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 07:23:52 PM AEST
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| A heart of gold can only be described as beautiful just like your poem.xx |
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Re: Your Golden Nuggets
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 09:23:24 PM AEST
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that is such a clever refreshing write! i love it:)
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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Re: Your Golden Nuggets
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by Crow on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 10:16:21 PM AEST
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excellent writing and good thoughts to hold.
hope you have a fine day my friend...Vincent |
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Re: Your Golden Nuggets
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by doug on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 10:52:09 PM AEST
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Your poem is also a piece of well
constructed gold. Very well written
and flows nicely. A good lesson as
well. Great work , Truly , Doug |
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Re: Your Golden Nuggets
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 06:55:02 AM AEST
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this is short but its like a story of the heart and its worth.. I absolutely love this write.. its so deep and meaningful great job
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Your Golden Nuggets
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by purplestary on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 11:15:02 AM AEST
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| OMG!!! absolutely amazing, fantastic, unbelievably well constructed....thank you so much for posting this...this is the best thing i have read in quit a while....nicely done...it's nice to see something so fresh...so ...different from the themes we've had going lately....themes like "crimson tears" and blood shed......but thats not what makes it so amazing...it is just constructed so well..with great flow...and a rhym scheme that works..and it's not like you tried TOO hard for the rhyme scheme losing the essence of what you were trying to say....you said it so well and it is as if the rythm, the flow and everything just kind of fell into place....this poem is ..dare i say it...a masterpeice... |
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Re: Your Golden Nuggets
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:18:36 PM AEST
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A very well ascribed poem you have here dearest ND~ It's depth and meaning go a long way my friend.
I have come to so much enjoy your poetry my friend. Thanks for sharing your amazing writings with us ND~
love & hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Your Golden Nuggets
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by shelby on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:18:53 PM AEST
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this made me smile, a lovely write and put tp paper with a great deal of talent.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Your Golden Nuggets
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by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 09:03:40 AM AEST
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Amidst this beautiful writting i detect some past pain or betrayal issue. Protect that heart of gold there'll be time's you'll need it and don't let it tarnish. this is a lovely peice of your usual sensitive and revealing and fragile inner self showing through. i like it.
another treasure ND
Ben |
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Re: Your Golden Nuggets
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 05:03:55 AM AEST
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| wonderful poem from a wonderful poet. just what the doctor ordered, hugs Eddy |
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