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LOST SOUL
Contributed by
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 01:17:30 PM in AEST
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ON THE WINGS OF AN ANGEL I NOW FLY
FOR MY LIFE IS OVER AND I WILL DIE
DEATH VERED IN TO TAKE ME AWAY
FOR NOW MY SOUL HAS GONE ASTRAY
FLYING HIGH TO NEVER BE SEEN
MY BODY LIES IN THAT RIVEEN
MY LIFE WAS TAKEN AWAY AND NO ONE CARES
EVEN FOR ALL THE LOVE I ONCE SHARED
SHARING IS GIVING BUT TAKING STEALING
NOW I LAY LIFELESS WITH NO MORE FEELING
MY BODY IS DEAD BUT STILL MY HEART WILL SORE
FOR IT IS YOU I WILL LOVE FOREVER MORE
FOR LOVING YOU IS ALL THAT I SOUGHT
NOW I REGRET THE TIMES THAT WE FOUGHT
I REGRET NOT SAYING I LOVE YOU
BUT NOW I AM DEAD THERE'S NOTHING I CAN DO
JUST ONE LAST THOUGHT AS I FLY AWAY
FOR IN MY HEART YOU WILL FOREVER STAY
Copyright ©
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
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2007-04-26 13:17:30]
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Re: LOST SOUL
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 01:30:10 PM AEST
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sooo sad,
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: LOST SOUL
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by emystar on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 01:30:34 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
Hang tuff, huggs,
emy |
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Re: LOST SOUL
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 07:26:07 PM AEST
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| Makes you think you should tell your loved ones every day you love them, brilliant poem xx |
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Re: LOST SOUL
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by brew on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 11:32:18 AM AEST
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THe soul you speak of..........WIll keep all...........How may you seek others, because ,this shows,,,,,its the ones' you loved.?!?! I feel for ones' heart who can not let go........breath....swallow, and think.......is it, what you can do...or mabybe can not????
Brew~ |
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Re: LOST SOUL
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 11:38:25 AM AEST
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Not bad. However, you should scratch the all caps, it looks too much like screaming. Also a bit more spelling refinement would be none too ill.
Andrew |
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