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Painless
Contributed by
BloodyTearDrops
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Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 07:16:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I cut myself to see if I still felt
I concentrate on my pain
It becomes way too much for me to bear
I’m right where you left me
It’s clear to me now
I am right where you want me
The scattered pieces of my restless mind
I remember the way you looked at me
All of my sorrow has been spilt
Flowing into my reflection
I hold my breath
Till the steady beats are shut out
I have become a slave to my memory
This is what I am
Who I have become
Betrayed emotions fill this empty mind
What is it that you find peace in
It is time to finally overcome all of this
These tears hold no more weight
Your commitment is only failure
With a piece of me taken away
I must look past
The first feeling from my heart is fading
My longings also fade into countless nights
How quickly I can forget
How you are already lost
You are left with nothing but a shattered soul
You have no-one to turn to
Now that I am finally gone!
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Re: Painless
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 09:12:04 AM AEST
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I CAN FEEL THE PAIN AND EMOTION IN THIS ... I LOVE IT
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Re: Painless
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 01:24:18 PM AEST
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Excellent
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