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6 feet deep
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 07:07:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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For once I finally find myself at ease
away from all thoughts of disease
and policies
For once I finally found myself at rest
no longer putting my life to the test
amongst the pest
For once I finally find myself somewhere
a place where there is no more care
to share
For once I finally found myself alive
its to bad that I hold the knife
to my life
For once I finally find myself asleep
with no more woes for me to reap
6 feet deep
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SuicidalSon
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2003-02-26 19:07:49]
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Re: 6 feet deep
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by yellow_sundragon on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 06:45:10 PM AEST
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This is catchy... good write.
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Re: 6 feet deep
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by adsalamon on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 10:58:16 AM AEST
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Re: 6 feet deep
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 15th May 2015 @ 02:20:57 PM AEST
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| I liked the concept here but I thought some of the rhymes were forced. I would have left out all the third lines except the last one.... |
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