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Careless
Contributed by
crow
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Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 09:59:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The words play soft
this might hurt"
lights quite dim
I remember..
you come back.
Isn`t it funny
so much moves in
black and white thoughts
hearts move-on.
Way back when
sounds so long
Me so careless
given your hands.
Now to then
blessing, or curse,
till the very last moment.. "We miss them.. Vincent
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2007-04-24 21:59:24]
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Re: Careless
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 10:24:13 PM AEST
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Sad and beautiful. This was a good poem. You expressed yourself wonderfully.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Careless
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 10:38:52 PM AEST
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Vincent this was like soft ache across the heart.
The second stanza had a searing affect on this soul.
Beautifully done, my friend.
~Breezy |
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Re: Careless
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 03:30:56 AM AEST
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Extremely touching write. Wow, so sad...this was so damn sad, made me think hard. Good write, my friend.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Careless
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 05:43:43 AM AEST
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so true.........
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Careless
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 01:37:13 PM AEST
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way back when...
good flow. |
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Re: Careless
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 02:07:37 PM AEST
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| It's one of those pieces you read and exhale as if to truly let go completely. Nicely done. |
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Re: Careless
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 11:09:55 AM AEST
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Vincent~
Dear poet friend a soft ache flows through my heart while reading this. Such a sad piece of writing. Beautiful in its sadness and heart touching. Thanks for sharing it with us.
love & hugs,
sue m |
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