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Sea turtles and mermaids
Contributed by
rhei76
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Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 04:24:19 PM in AEST
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InternetLove
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I look at your picture
on the screen
wish it was a mirror
to see you with me
My mind seems to be
inside a fantasy
never tripping
just holding on a
beautiful thing
What will happen in this sea
I know I'll be happy
in the mirror
to see you with me
But I have yet to greet
the shore
waiting for your beautiful voice
to bring me a board
starring into the screen
waiting to be yours
Copyright ©
rhei76
... [
2007-04-24 16:24:19]
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Re: Sea turtles and mermaids
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 10:26:11 PM AEST
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Beautiful. This shows your need and wanting to be heard by this person and seen. You did a wonderful job. Great poem.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Sea turtles and mermaids
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 02:43:41 PM AEST
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A truly beautiful poem filled with the child like innosence that could only belong to one in possesion of a heart longing for love. a beautiful read this was as well as write.
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Re: Sea turtles and mermaids
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 10:25:17 PM AEST
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| what a beautiful longing write, very good read, excellent write. Vincent |
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Re: Sea turtles and mermaids
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 11:58:18 PM AEST
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What a wonderful bit of poetry filled with the sweet innocence of romance. A side few can write about so wonderfully. I especially love how the title does not convey anything in the poem, and yet in a slight sense does. A wonderful job all around!
BRAVO!
SCM |
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Re: Sea turtles and mermaids
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 12:11:19 AM AEST
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Oh wow! What an incredibly and torturously beautiful analogy.
(I mean torturous in the most amazing way). The last stanza is so
utterly moving. It is a definite torment to not be with the one you desire
most, but wow, how insanely wonderful it is to imagine and know that
one day .. you will be. :) Superb poetry. ADORE the title!
~Breezy |
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Re: Sea turtles and mermaids
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by runawaynameless on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 01:43:31 AM AEST
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| aww that was so sweet! it was about me, right? ok im just kidding, i know the world doesnt revolve around me.... it just seems that way some times, ok well love ya hope to talk to you later |
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