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widows mite
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 03:19:21 PM in AEST
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came from ages past
in my palm i hold this coin
set in a necklace.
history abounds
i am awed by the symbol
small perfect lantern.
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ladyfawn
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Re: widows mite
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 03:41:24 PM AEST
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Oh my, I am such a fan of haiku and I love how you incorporated these two together into a mysterious story. The necklace sounds so beautiful and intriguing. Bravo! Thank you for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: widows mite
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 04:21:22 PM AEST
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Way to go Nessa~
I have never attempted Haiku, but I gotta hand it to you, you have done a mighty fine job with this gem of a write. I totally enjoyed it.
Thanks for posting it~
love & hugs,
sue m |
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Re: widows mite
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 10:52:09 PM AEST
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Wow Nessa, this has such an incredible mysterious
glow about it. You created a perfect image in my mind.
I admit to never really understanding haikus in the past,
but you and Laura do them so well, I have a new appreciation
and love for them. Excellent!! :)
@-->------
~Breezy |
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Re: widows mite
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 01:44:24 AM AEST
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Wonderfully penned.
FRANCO. |
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Re: widows mite
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 01:54:20 PM AEST
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This poem is like a small gem that sparkle in an alluring fashion. Quite enchanting Nessa. your writting has an air of refreshing mystique. A charming little peice of poetry.
((((Nessa))))
Ben |
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Re: widows mite
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 10:08:07 PM AEST
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| Nessa I find these writes leave me wanting more! beautiful my friend. |
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Re: widows mite
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by emystar on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 03:26:03 PM AEST
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Very beautifully written.
Luv the title.
Go girl.
big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: widows mite
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 09:54:52 PM AEST
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| You do Haiku so well. Excellent |
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Re: widows mite
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by Dom on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 02:16:13 AM AEST
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A beautifully intriguing melding of two haikus, I am left wanting to know more!
Lovely ~
Dom |
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Re: widows mite
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by colinb on
Monday, 7th July 2014 @ 01:27:06 AM AEST
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| great haiku Nessa |
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