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I Can't Believe its Over
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 12:50:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I never thought that this could happen
The day that you would leave
My heart is just so broken
Its so very hard to breathe
I want so much to hate you
But I don’t know why I cant
You were the first that I loved
And now I am all alone
You’re not the one I fell in love with
Something in you changed
You promised me forever
But forever was a lie
Still I feel these feelings
False hope fills my head
That maybe you’ll come back to me
But your love for me is dead
You say you want to be my friend
But how is that even possible
When every time I look at you
I feel like I could die
I wish so much that we could be friends
But right now its just too much
I told you that I loved you
Never were words so true
I wish I could go back
To when you loved me too
~Goodbye Love~
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CrimsonTears
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2007-04-24 12:50:43]
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Re: I Can't Believe its Over
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by runawaynameless on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 01:13:51 PM AEST
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| im sorry people change. i am going through a similar situation. i hope one day things will be better. i really enjoyed your writing. |
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Re: I Can't Believe its Over
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 01:22:00 PM AEST
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well woven words, beautiful expression of feelings...
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: I Can't Believe its Over
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 02:12:56 PM AEST
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I didn't notice the fact that you hadn't posted all i know is this is quite sad and touching, i realy felt your pain in reading this. I'm sorry your hurting and hope in time all will be as it was again. A remarkable peice of writting that realy reach out from your soul within.
Ben |
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Re: I Can't Believe its Over
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by whiskybear on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 02:42:00 PM AEST
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i know your pain... i'm going through the same thing but just remember things happen in life for a reason... look towards the furture not the past
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Re: I Can't Believe its Over
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 10:27:45 PM AEST
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I can relate to this so much.. I had went through this with my ex boyfriend. I loved him so much and he left me broken and bleeding and no matter what I couldn't hate him until two months later. He was my first love. And it crushed me to not have him anymore. But I dealt with it they way I could and I have someone now who I know loves me for me and will never say forever and not mean it.. this was a raw honest poem and your emotions flowed through your words...
Take care
*hugs*
Christina..
Keep your chin up and stay strong.. It is going to be hard either way.. |
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