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MY WISH
Contributed by
bruce
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Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 12:48:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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MY WISH IS, THAT SOMEDAY, AND I HOPE
IT REALLY, WILL COME TRUE
SO THAT I CAN SPEND
THE REST OF MY LIFE, WITH AND LOVING YOU
HOW LUCKY WOULD I BE
IF THIS SHOULD COME ABOUT
AND MY WISH WAS GRANTED
I WOULD, STAND UP AND SHOUT
THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU
MY LOVE, IS FINALLY HERE
TO LOVE AND CHERISH
EVERY DAY OF EVERY YEAR
WITH A DEEP AND STRONG LOVE
AS WELL AS, AN UNDERSTANDING TOO
MAKING EVERYDAY, OF OUR LIVES
LIVING, UNDER A SKY OF BLUE
MAGIC, WOULD BE IN THE AIR
WITH EVERY BREATH , THAT WE TAKE
PLEASE MAKE MY WISH COME TRUE
SO THIS WONDERFUL LIFE, WE CAN MAKE
Copyright ©
bruce
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2007-04-24 00:48:01]
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Re: MY WISH
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 01:15:29 AM AEST
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Bruce, this was a lovely, lovely display of devotion and loyalty.
Your words wrap around the sentiment like a beautiful caress and
touch the heart of your reader so deeply.
(the only thing I'd suggest in the future, is that you lose the caps
lock. Internet etiquettesuggests that it is akin to yelling ... )
Great post!!
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Re: MY WISH
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 01:31:08 PM AEST
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so lovely!!
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: MY WISH
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by bluestars on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 06:33:14 AM AEST
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Love this piece
I really hope ur wish comes
true if it hasnt come true already :)
Best wishes |
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Re: MY WISH
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 02:02:59 PM AEST
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Great poem yes may your wish come true let's hope so, the world could use some good karma. Nice presentation.
Ben |
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Re: MY WISH
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 03:52:47 AM AEST
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Beautiful. This was heartfelt and lovely. Wonderful poem.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: MY WISH
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by ThanhThanh on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2011 @ 03:27:14 PM AEST
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i love this poem very much.
It reminds me of the time when I began to love and wish that my true love come true.
But now that I do not wish any more love, it still reminds me of those beautifully green years of my life.
Many thanks to the poet. |
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