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Strange Love

Contributed by tejas9999 on Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 08:10:20 PM in AEST
Topic: fictional

Strange Love

It’s really strange
The way I feel
I really love you
But I know it’s not real

You’re just perfect
The way I made you
Out of thin air
A character in few

You were there in all
My best selling books
You were a brave woman
Who caught all the crooks

Those green eyes
The slight blush on you face
You were happy yet sad
But you never showed a trace

You’re all out of love
Because I have created you such
I could create a perfect love for you
But the jealousy would hurt me much

Only if you were existent
Then we could be together
Free and in love
Feeling as light as a feather

But you’re only a character
Created in my mind
And when I die
I will leave everything behind

Those fake memories
Of spending the time with you
I will write down all of them
And leave them for you

Maybe if ever you decide
To come out of those books one day
I wouldn’t be there with you
But my memories will be there to stay

Maybe someday you’ll be there
So then, I could love you
And not just as a fictional character
But a person who’s true

- Tejas Thakker

Copyright Â© tejas9999 ... [ 2007-04-23 20:10:20]
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Re: Strange Love (User Rating: 1 )
by DeeMeister on Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 11:53:37 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. The subject is so unusual and reminiscent of the Pygmalion myth. Keep up the good work!

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