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of your love forever
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 09:27:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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over all mountains and the sea
my thankful heart i give to thee
we had not world enough, nor time
loosing you, lifes most hurtful crime
one hundred years for you, my praise
now i live in empty, hollow, lonely days
tis the force of scattered time; love reigns
till my muse shall follow far behind again
beautiful healthy mind, body, spirit strong
misfortune, why, this one ive loved so, all along
seems earth from its most center, with me crys
as i scream still, why!?to azure blue skies
near we came to bliss, before thy sudden fall
at once, your death; which overturned us all
so shall tears fall on past grief, unending-shed
like petals hanging by a finely woven thread
that island of love which seas cannot devour
lives in this soul, more forlorn, hour by hour
to this day strong enough to launch 1000ships
that farewell kiss you placed upon my lips
write of your love forever...
forget you, never...
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ladyfawn
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2007-04-23 09:27:12]
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Re: of your love forever
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 10:02:01 AM AEST
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Oh Nessa this is simply beautiful and yet touched with that hint of longing and sadness.
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Re: of your love forever
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 11:34:34 AM AEST
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You have painted this poem with fresh emotional colors with a stroke of sadness that has completed this poem into a classic.
FRANCO. |
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Re: of your love forever
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by GingerB on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 01:06:59 PM AEST
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Amazing how you can produce such great work with each stroke of your pen.
I've missed your words, and you.
Hugs and Woofies
Ginny |
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Re: of your love forever
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 02:55:05 PM AEST
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Mystifyingly beautiful. Emotionaly moving with a warmth all it's own. Most lovely.
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Re: of your love forever
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by venkat on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 07:43:22 PM AEST
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Marvellous writing..the farewell kiss strong enough to launch1000ships ..
Nessa.. my friend..this is such a heart touching write..big hugs.. venkat |
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Re: of your love forever
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by Angelic_Demon on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 10:10:02 PM AEST
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| Hey Mom... this had a lot of visionary...which made it absolutely beautiful. :D |
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Re: of your love forever
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 12:50:34 AM AEST
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| JUST TRULY BEAUTIFUL |
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Re: of your love forever
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 03:44:56 AM AEST
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Nessa, what a gorgeous tale of longing and loneliness.
Your words were like a beautiful flowing river that cascades
over the heart and touches deeply.
... the last two lines are impossibly beautiful and moving ~
Lovely work, my friend.
@ -->--------
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Re: of your love forever
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 07:57:10 AM AEST
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this is a lost love poetry masterpiece.. so full of longing and pain.. such expressiveness.. exquistely enchanting!!
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: of your love forever
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by derb on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 11:05:19 AM AEST
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| i enjoyed this poem not only for the emotions it taps but also because i learn a great deal from your style of writing. very nice. |
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Re: of your love forever
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 11:09:19 AM AEST
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| Nessa you open your heart and let the reader in with this write. peace, and always love to you my friend. Vincent |
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Re: of your love forever
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 12:15:57 PM AEST
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Sweet friend Nessa~
This is beautifully sad hun. The sadness and the longing are penned perfectly throughout your wonderful write. With each stroke of your pen you touch your readers heart & soul~
* beautiful* as is all your amazing poetry~
love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: of your love forever
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 04:30:52 PM AEST
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Wow, how beautiful. Those last two lines just got me hook, line and sinker. An amazing write, filled with such sadness and longing??? Loved it.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: of your love forever
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by emystar on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 03:21:43 PM AEST
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wOW, GIRLFRIEND,
tHIS IS HAEART WRENCHIN BUT BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN.
I've been thru much in my life but the loss of a husband has to be hard. Loosing a child or children I can't comprehend.
You are very tuff person, my friend. To keep going on after such a loss has to be a miracle.
Big luv, huggs, prayer, admiration,
emy |
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Re: of your love forever
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by AirHead on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 09:14:12 PM AEST
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| So beuatiful |
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Re: of your love forever
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 02:16:09 PM AEST
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wow...so much passion. i wish my writing could be more sophisticated like yours. i'm blown away by the your diction as well. ur more talented than i! haha take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: of your love forever
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by colinb on
Monday, 7th July 2014 @ 01:30:01 AM AEST
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| so much passion in your words |
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