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Oh How the Tables May Turn
Contributed by
justagirl82
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Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 12:59:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The moment I raise myself up,
They push me back down.
Why is it that they won’t let me just be?
Are they insecure of themselves and showing that through me?
Or is it fun to watch me fall?
Is it fun to watch me cry?
Is it fun to laugh while I’m reaching out for help?
Is it fun to know it’s all your fault?
Please inform me,
Because if it’s really that fun, maybe it’s your turn to be the guinea pig and I’ll be the one laughing.
How does that sound?
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2007-04-23 00:59:55]
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Re: Oh How the Tables May Turn
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 02:31:48 AM AEST
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Good job. We all would like to turn the tables every now and then. Just make sure not to turn them in a violent way. You get more accomplished with words and making people think about themselves than hurting them. Hurting them only justifies their intial action. For if you are actually a good person, then why would you retaliate? The way to prove you are above the pack is to be above the pack.
Great Job!
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Re: Oh How the Tables May Turn
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by Kellros on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 03:27:42 AM AEST
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| People have become animals, it will be ok :). Just go on with your life and ignore them, they'll leave you alone when you show no interest or reaction to their actions. |
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Re: Oh How the Tables May Turn
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by funkgirl93 on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 03:43:03 AM AEST
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| I really like the first part of your poem but then I don't liked very much the last part (please inform me till how does that sound?). Apart that, the poem is really good :) Great job! |
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