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Morning
Contributed by
crow
on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 12:51:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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and the distinct sound
morning dove awakes
beckons the world
on It`s own.
and should I remember
it has pasted?
remember It will be there..
should I return.
and the breeze
gentle in one`s face
will it return..
can I carry it with me
in my passing,
I will miss it`s fragrance.
and the laughter,
thought of the world
feeling too,
my small space"
thinking a great expanse.
diamonds mark each minute
gold lines the hour,
what is truly in a heart,
a soul?
and a morning...
as brief as the thought. Vincent
Copyright ©
crow
... [
2007-04-23 00:51:03]
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Re: Morning
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 01:01:02 AM AEST
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Wonderful thoughts poet. Well conveyed and poetic, hey it's a poem, lol. Awesome job! I am looking forward to more from you, wide eyed wonder.
BRAVO!
- SCM |
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Re: Morning
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 03:27:07 AM AEST
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I loved this , flowing and thoughtful leaving with it a moment of calm. The dove I could hear its song. Lovely.
Michelle |
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Re: Morning
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 03:37:26 AM AEST
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I so love the way you write. Your style is so unique, so beautiful, so real. Thank you for sharing this kind piece of writing.
Peace and hugs,
Laura (your hippie sis) |
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Re: Morning
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 03:51:09 AM AEST
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this is beautiful...
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Morning
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 08:59:10 AM AEST
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Vincent, what a beautiful piece of imagery you've created
for us and so full of emotive thought. You've really captured
the beauty of morning with your sweet words ..
Lovely write.
~Breezy |
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Re: Morning
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by needledancing on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 03:07:35 PM AEST
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| An exquisite write my friend. Your appreciation of each moment you experience shines in this piece. |
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Re: Morning
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by derb on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 10:57:15 AM AEST
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| i think poetry is most powerful when a few words convey much. very nice writing. |
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Re: Morning
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 12:49:23 PM AEST
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Vincent~
Wonderful thoughts put down perfectly with each word and with every line. Your poetry is wonderful and I have come to so much enjoy your writes very much. Each one paints a beautiful picture inside your readers mind.
Well done Vincent and may your mornings always be bright & happy ones~
love & hugs,
sue m
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