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Into Love
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Sunday, 22nd April 2007 @ 10:43:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I woke in love this morning
oh I love...
I love it
when sweet emotions are thrilling me,
and
Visions of angels
whispering words of love
ebb and flow...
taking me
to where I never been before.
I can only smile
as love
flows through me
I bask in the warmth
that the fires of desire bring,
it feels so good
that I start crying
but they are tears of joy
so it's heavenly,
it's like ah
magical mystery tour
and I'm in awe
of what's happening.
When I'm in love
I flow
to places
that were unknown.
Here it comes
and it's
so strong,
here it comes here it comes
here comes love.
and when I am in love
I float high above
only good things I'm thinking of
like ah
kissing all day and making love,
I can never get enough
of what comes with love
like the sweet romantic stuff
give it to me
that's what I want.
I woke up this morning
I was in love...
and now
all I wanna do
is
hugging and kissing
and tenderly touching,
I love it when emotions flow free.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
... [
2007-04-22 22:43:02] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Into Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Crow on
Sunday, 22nd April 2007 @ 10:50:14 PM AEST (User
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this is the first poem i`ve read this Morning.
what a bright, and beautiful read. good way to start the day. nice work. Vincent |
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Re: Into Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by jenniferstein2007 on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 12:29:41 AM AEST (User
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this is good |
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Re: Into Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 02:08:56 AM AEST (User
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Ouch, this stabbed me right in the heart, in such a sweet way. It is wonderful to be in love and you certainly captured that feeling with a brilliant flow and wonderfully poetic and realistic word choices. A great relaxing, breath of fresh air; was this work. A lovely read. Thanks so much for sharing with us.
Oh and not to deline your write because it was great as a whole but....
so it's heavenly,
it's like ah
magical mystery tour
and I'm in awe
of what's happening.
....was wonderful and the Beatles would appreciate being blurbed in such a great work I am sure.
WELL DONE!
SCM |
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Re: Into Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 02:09:04 AM AEST (User
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Wow tony.
It's a joy to read this type of write from you.
I take it things are working out for you more.
Uh huh, gret work.
big smiles, mucho luv, hugs, joy, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Into Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 04:42:00 AM AEST (User
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awwww... so sweet:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Into Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 12:03:52 AM AEST (User
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Wow! You have really excelled at capturing and displaying the emotions that wash over
and ultimately consume us when in love. How beautiful! It is indeed an emotion that
can entice tears of the happiest nature. It settles in the middle of our hearts and
creates a world where the object of our affection is the last thing we think of before
sleep, and the first thought our minds allow upon awakening.
And it is, indeed glorious! Well done, poet.
~Breezy |
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Re: Into Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by frmpoison2static on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 10:59:19 AM AEST (User
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nice, good word usage. |
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Re: Into Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Honey56 on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 11:27:48 AM AEST (User
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Now this is extra good!
Excellent poem..
Best wishes. |
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Re: Into Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 03:52:47 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful.. I liked this poem.. You did a wonderful job expressing yourself in this.. Love can be such a wonderful thing.. Always hold on to it.. Well done poem..
Take care
Christina |
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