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light
Contributed by
de13aser
on
Sunday, 22nd April 2007 @ 05:16:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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this human form of flesh and fluid, dying from inception...
a gift of life, a flash of light, eternities deception...
our love is not of these things made, but timeless as the stars...
for after breath has left us both, the light remains is ours...
unspoken vows that lovers swear with eyes and touch of skin...
bonds across the span of time to when life itself began...
as heavens crumble, skys grow dark, and constellations fade...
the glow, the gleam that radiates, is what our love has made...
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2007-04-22 17:16:13]
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Re: light
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by purplestary on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 12:05:51 AM AEST
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| beautiful..great flow and rhym scheme...awsome writing. |
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Re: light
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 06:33:08 AM AEST
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| Great poem, flowed nicely, a joy to read. |
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