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Fallen For You
Contributed by
The_Unknown
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Sunday, 22nd April 2007 @ 04:26:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Almost pathetic
I've fallen for him
Though this can never be
Not unless he travels a thousand miles
Come on love
Lets both run away
Take my hand
I swear I will never ever leave you behind
You are so special to me
I just want to keep you close to me forever
This love will probably never be
But all I can do is hope
When ever I feel like I'm going to break down and cry
He's always there for me
If I need to let something off my chest
I can count on him to be there
I'll always love him
Forever
Even if we can't be
And I know he loves me back
But we're so far apart
Come on love
Lets both run away
Take my hand
I swear I will never leave you behind
I love you
We're still young
But I'll never get over you
Lets both run away
I love you
I swear I'll never let go
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The_Unknown
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Re: Fallen For You
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by Bruce on
Sunday, 22nd April 2007 @ 06:40:49 PM AEST
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| very well written, been there done that, go get him |
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Re: Fallen For You
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 22nd April 2007 @ 10:47:21 PM AEST
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Love sweet love
good flow. |
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Re: Fallen For You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 01:41:31 AM AEST
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Very heart felt work you have here. Wonderful sentiments and great flow. In a word, gentle. Great subject matter tackled with such an ease. Thanks for sharing this work and keep it up.
BRAVO!
- SCM |
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Re: Fallen For You
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 10:59:07 AM AEST
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beautiful and from the heart, i hope it works out:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Fallen For You
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by musicXisXlife on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 02:36:51 PM AEST
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| This is super duper fantabulously good. |
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