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Time
Contributed by
sadaddy
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Sunday, 22nd April 2007 @ 11:35:47 AM in AEST
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Time does not stand still
For anyone who is here
This is very true
From the beginning
So we must continue
To look to the future
Because time cannot return
And the past we must not live
So time moves on
To make a new
Whether we want it too
Or we rather it not
The time that has passed
From the days gone by
Will never be returned
For us to recall
It was very painful see
The times fly by so fast
Knowing what could have been
From the life that you have chosen
Time does not stand still
For anyone who is here
For our lives will continue
With or without you
But I rather it be with you
Then without you this much is true
I can only hope and pray
For time to continue
With you in it
Copyright ©
sadaddy
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2007-04-22 11:35:47]
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Re: Time
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 11:50:26 PM AEST
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This was a great piece with strong and wise advice.
You are so right .. we should never live in the past, for
we miss so much of the present and ultimately sacrifice
the future. Learn from our past, we MUST, but letting it
go is the best thing we could do for ourselves...
What a message!! Great work here.
~Breezy |
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Re: Time
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 02:51:30 PM AEST
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Good work friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Time
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by needledancing on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 09:13:27 PM AEST
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Yes friend time stands still for no man.
Yet time is also endless. A well done piece and reminder to enjoy every moment of every day. |
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