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unknown title at this time
Contributed by
purplestary
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Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 12:12:15 PM in AEST
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good things are hard to find
you could have been a good thing
you didn't have to be....you...
you were you though...
i couldn't stop it...
we fell...fell to peices...
like a shattered mirror...
like a glass that falls to the floor.
the pain was just too much.
my heart is broken,
i wonder..is yours?
do you wonder?
if you'll ever be happy...
i do....wonder about you,
for you...i worry about you...
cuz i couldn't make you...
though, you made me...complete...
at first you made me happy...
then you made me sad....
THEN you made me angry
now you make me scared...
INcomplete....
we're over now, and i'm ok with that...
and that scares me...
because..i wanted you..
completely,
always,
forever....thats what we said...
Forever....
but, like and ending to a book
it's over...
like a turning of a page..
So, i close the book...
find peace within the end...
it's only your end though...
Me...i've just begun...
I don't regret a thing,
for..true love i knew...
even if only for a while....
I'll never regret you....
I hope you regret me though...
just for the pain, the hurt you caused...
i can't seem to shake that part....
as hard as i tried, just for a smile...
a simple "goodmorning beautiful"...
one loving touch....other then at bed time...
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Simple things surprise me now....
like men who don't get angry with me,
like men who don't punch walls..
the one that baffles me the most...
this man i know...who smiles,
and gently touches my face...
he touches me with a look...
a look i have never seen....
a look that says he loves me
for everything i am,
for nothing that i'm not....
i wish he knew the way i feel
the things he does to me....
the fact that i've never felt this way
and that noones ever touched my face...
not the way he does..not loving..like he does...
i tell him that i love him....
but i don't feel thats enough...
he'll never know the truth...
the extent my love grows to...
in a way i'm glad he doesn't know...
because i'm still afraid of letting go...
i don't think that my heart can take it...
another break...another cut...
so i'm leaving it slightly closed off...
but like hide and seak..it wants to come out...
come out from behind the wall...
it's hard to let it out though...
i just recently glued it back together...
like a shattered mirror...
like a glass that falls to the floor....
like an old picture thats been torn apart...
like this poem..peiced together...
with words, tape, glue, and tears.....
scars still left to heal....
past mistakes...past painful breaks...
what do you do with that?
-ann-
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Re: unknown title at this time
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by Kimberlynn on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 02:02:47 PM AEST
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| You wrote this well, I loved it. I applaud! |
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 04:10:59 PM AEST
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| wonderful piece of poetry , I likee in fact I likee alot,, hugs Eddy |
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 09:08:31 AM AEST
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Well holy HECK!!!!
This was such an enormous read! You took us on a journedy with
you through the land of heartbreak .. then heartstirrings .. then
fear ... fear to trust again, to give all, to allow ourselves to be
vulnerable.
This is torture, misery and OH! so passionately beautiful hun. Do it.
Trust yourself. Allow yourself to be vulnerable again .. pain is such a
delight when it's followed by the wonder and beauty of love and passion.
Exceptionally provocative.
~Breezy |
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Re: unknown title at this time
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 10:48:22 AM AEST
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It is well said poem on a journey towards love and its path that takes through; with various shades of emotion filled in one poem and cleverly executed.
Wonderfully penned.
FRANCO. |
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by needledancing on
Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 03:26:44 AM AEST
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| A splendid transition from pain of love to fear of loving again. Many have shared this transition and can relate. Wonderfully done and from the heart share. A powerful ability to heal poet for sure.Reaching a hand to those who have wondered what to do when it ends and how to begin again. Totally aspiring. |
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by jackson21 on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 03:29:42 PM AEST
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| I am in awe of this wonderous piece of writing in front of me!!!!!! oh my god, it is such well written piece of raw emotions! i just can't seem to say enough of how it has touched me so! I was stuck for such a long time with similar thoughts of those roaming around in my mind, overbearing my everyday. and in some way they still are! You have seemed to bring out my mind and put it on a piece of paper! the only difference is that all of that would be about one man for me, for we split and yet he still haunts my every day and thoughts! (he is still a very close friends of mine)!!!! but oh my god,....... in awe! amazing work! i am so glad that i took the time to read it! Yours sincerely, Jack! |
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