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From Somber to Uncertainty
Contributed by
Gravehorn
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Thursday, 19th April 2007 @ 12:53:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Akin to dim lit embers of a shattered waning flame,
The winds of time flew swiftly by and stripped my foul name.
For once where I had held a role in sable, willowed halls,
A tragic truth had born itself beneath the moonlit falls.
A veil of silence followed suit while loneliness took part
As guardian and savior of my maledicting heart.
I cursed the world and all its flaws, its hoary fabled lore.
My life was grand but now in death I found I hungered more.
T’was not enough to idly sit and bathe in death’s embrace,
For out the grave came timely cause and utter self disgrace.
No mortal sustenance could calm my squalid, carnal pine,
So within time I paid a price, a hefty hallowed fine.
[Not completed yet]
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Gravehorn
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2007-04-19 12:53:04]
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Re: From Somber to Uncertainty
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by emystar on
Thursday, 19th April 2007 @ 01:05:35 PM AEST
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Personally I don't see any thing wrong with this as is.
Very thought provoking write.
huggs,
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Re: From Somber to Uncertainty
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 19th April 2007 @ 10:18:56 PM AEST
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I have to agree. I think it is a very good poem right now. Hopefully you will finish it. You are doing a good job. Great poem so far.
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Re: From Somber to Uncertainty
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by shelby on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 03:32:02 AM AEST
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We are our own worst critic, I think this is sound and solid, written with the touch of a poetic with talent.
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