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Virginia Carnage.
Contributed by
FRANCO
on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 08:30:49 PM in AEST
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Dreams drowned in the
floods of juvenile blood
in a blink of an eye, fell to
the ground knowing not
the object of the fall.
At ease were their parents
until the horrid word
of their offspring sprang,
to shun the shining day
light out of their life
forever.
Young scholars stunned stare,
and grieving kin’s mute cry
howling police cars, chaos
everywhere; will our
children ever be spared?
As long, as guns in our land sold to lunatic men for fun,
oh, fellowmen, let us get used these bloody run.
FRANCO.
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2007-04-18 20:30:49]
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Re: Virginia Carnage.
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 09:01:54 PM AEST
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its so horrible what that lunatic did! my heart goes out to all of them....
excellent poem,
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Virginia Carnage.
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by sandypoet on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 09:55:34 PM AEST
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| A very good poem. I wonder sometimes franco, IF they try and take weapons away from households let us say... THERE will always be weapons on the streets then if one comes into your home to hurt you. YOU won't have protection. I am afraid many don't see that. A very scary world now. I like how you put your words together . pure poetry. |
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Re: Virginia Carnage.
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 10:17:47 PM AEST
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My heart, thoughts and prayers are with the victims and their families. Oh Franco I have shed many tears my friend and wonder how another human being could take not just one life but 32 others. What is this world coming to. It happened in a college/school where children are supposed/meant to be safe.
Dearest Franco a very heartfelt piece which brought many tears to fill my eyes. Much love & blessings to you & yours and much strength & prayers to the families/friends of the victims who died in the Virginia shootings~
*huge hugs*
sue m |
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Re: Virginia Carnage.
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 19th April 2007 @ 10:41:58 AM AEST
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My heart goes out to those familys and the shooters family .
Don't get me wrong things must of been done to that kid to make him go on a shooting rampage.
Thats my opinion but anyways you did a great job on this write. |
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Re: Virginia Carnage.
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by emystar on
Thursday, 19th April 2007 @ 06:14:30 PM AEST
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Tis a sad, sad day for all that watches the news.
It's a sighn of the times.
the more the news un ravels it gets even more sad.
We must continue to hold them up in prayer.
Well written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Virginia Carnage.
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by venkat on
Thursday, 19th April 2007 @ 07:58:39 PM AEST
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Its very sad..shed a drop of tear.
venkat
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Re: Virginia Carnage.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th April 2007 @ 04:51:30 AM AEST
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Franco, thank you for this. It is a most provocative
write... especially those last couple lines.
Wonderful that you could pen something that will ultimately
move hearts and MINDS to rethink things, my friend.
words are the first step to change. Thank you for posting ..
~Breezy |
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Re: Virginia Carnage.
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by shelby on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 03:46:11 AM AEST
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My heart bleeds for the families of the victims of this terrible ordeal. Such a sad day. Your wrote this with such emotion and talent, blessing to you and your heart for thinking of them and sharing with us.
Michelle |
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