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Wanderings which cross ones Mind
Contributed by
brew
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Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 11:19:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Rain falling
Dreams stirring, bringing up feelings which have never stopped
A soft mist falls on thy face
You close your eyes, and ....Know
This has been not a dream but some sort of reality, that has become clearer
Clearer in the mind, and soul
Cascading images
Flawless mirrors
With someone on the other side
Blissful whispers which follow
Sunsets which are brighter
Stars which are close
A never ending rose
Which never dies
Wonders never seem to cease the Human , Mind
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brew
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2007-04-18 11:19:23]
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Re: Wanderings which cross ones Mind
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 11:22:37 AM AEST
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| I LOVE THAT ONE MAYBE IT SHOULD RAIN MORE LOL J/K |
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Re: Wanderings which cross ones Mind
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 01:17:57 PM AEST
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beautiful, soft and flowing...
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Wanderings which cross ones Mind
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 09:51:37 PM AEST
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| Brew.. what a heartful write, pinch of sad" pinch of bright, just the right mix" great read. Vincent |
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Re: Wanderings which cross ones Mind
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 10:24:25 PM AEST
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Dearest friend Dayna~
A soft, beautiful and very well penned poem you have here. You have a big beautiful heart of gold. I hope you find that someone special who will give you the right kind of loving real soon girl~
Beautiful as always. Thanks for sharing it with us~
*love & hugs*
dreamer |
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Re: Wanderings which cross ones Mind
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th April 2007 @ 05:39:15 AM AEST
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Beautiful post, hun. I think this is among your
very best, hun!! Incredible imagery, passion
and beauty abounds within your words.
...and that last line .. powerful and true!
This is undeniably one of your most motivational
writes, Dayna. A sheer gem among gems.
Absolute and unpretentious. So exceptionally lovely.
~Breezy |
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Re: Wanderings which cross ones Mind
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 03:05:29 AM AEST
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Wonderful job poet! I love the way you make gentle and soft transition from rain, dream, and into reality. Quite brilliant. Wonderful wording, flows with an ease even in transition. Quite an amazing and beautiful job!
BRAVO!
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Re: Wanderings which cross ones Mind
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 02:22:42 PM AEST
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I like this very much, a relaxing read. vivid and leading and i just followed along. Most enjoyable dayna.
Ben |
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