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~~~~OCEAN~~BREEZE~~~~
Contributed by
kickass
on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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i see myself in the reflection prone to the lake,
i gallantly sweep up the breeze like a dove,
the wind passes through me,
for eternity,
i shall hold the doubt of my one true love ever coming back,
for i am the sea the land and the earth,
in your heart forever,
i gasp at the cold heart of my savior from drowning,
how he ever so found me was of pure chance,
i had no clue he would help me with such a cold heart,
but then i felt his hands,
pick me up sweep me off the ground,
i never knew why it was so pure hearted of him,
i never thanked him,
now i dedicate this poem to my one true savior,
i sweep by the trees,
gaping in the breeze,
why did he ever come for me?
why did he ever do something to be,
my savior,
my one true hope,
he saved me from pure fate,
and i can never debate,
that when i let out a piercing cry,
he came right to my side,
thank you,
so much you're my new,
friend----------------------
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kickass
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2003-02-26 14:00:00]
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Re: ~~~~OCEAN~~BREEZE~~~~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 04:14:43 PM AEST
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| are you a girl?? |
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Re: ~~~~OCEAN~~BREEZE~~~~
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by kickass on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 04:15:57 PM AEST
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| yes, would you like to hook up? |
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Re: ~~~~OCEAN~~BREEZE~~~~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 04:17:07 PM AEST
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| sure!! |
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Re: ~~~~OCEAN~~BREEZE~~~~
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by kickass on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 04:20:35 PM AEST
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| HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ALL OF THOSE ARE FAKE AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAAHAHAHA ALL 3 AHAHAHAHAHAHA AHHAHAHAHAAHAHHA HENCE Post Anonymously |
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Re: ~~~~OCEAN~~BREEZE~~~~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 04:21:41 PM AEST
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| YOU BOZO I THOUGHT YOU WERE A GIRL!! |
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Re: ~~~~OCEAN~~BREEZE~~~~
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by kickass on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 04:23:31 PM AEST
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
F A K E |
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