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Storm

Contributed by Inevitable on Tuesday, 17th April 2007 @ 10:59:03 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The rain is so cold
and it showers down on her
lightening pierces through the sky
and thunder barrels its way along the clouds
She weeps as her skin is drenched,
Stopping next to a puddle
The streets barren and empty.

He's left her all alone
and that makes her bleed
She loves him
but he'll tell her she must not,
For she does not throw her beliefs for him

Her feelings are so hurt
She takes out a razor, and turns it over in her hands
Is it worth it? She asks herself, If it means losing him forever?
She wants to run the blade across her skin,
to let the water wash away all of her pain
but come the day,
when he turns over her wrist
and spots the freshly made cuts
She'll lose what's left of her heart.
He'll leave her for good.

She takes one last look at the razor,
then throws it into the puddle
crying in heavy sobs through the passing of the storm.

Copyright © Inevitable ... [ 2007-04-17 10:59:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 17th April 2007 @ 03:13:29 PM AEST
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aww how sad it put tears in my eyes.
hope your doing ok?
take care
if you ever wanna talk i am just a pm away.

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