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hearts in space
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 05:45:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
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hearts in space traveling timelessly
unending black pitch night envelopes
rather a marriage of the minds that
they touch softly, knowing in this universe,
it is only they two...
together in full passionate embrace
yet; they are unable to touch in a tangible
way, they are the heart of hearts, the soul
of souls, the mind of minds, alas this is all
that is left of them...
dare they try to travel ever alone again?
there is no future without one the other;
it would be eternal darkness to go each
their own way, indeed, for once love is
found, it must be cherished...
ahh, but here came, when they only blinked,
the forces of the universe which made them
part, it was not sad at first, for they were two
together and happy to be so, for sooo long
then at once alone...
hearts in space cascading timelessly, now
separate and panicky; curl up and cease to
exist or continue on? what choice is to be had,
until once more a safe place within themselves
is attained, that happy balance...
alas, ever looking for each the other.
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Re: hearts in space
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by Angelic_Demon on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 06:17:43 AM AEST
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Aww, you're on a roll with the writing, aren't you Mom? I'm glad though. I really missed your poetry.
Anyway it's a beautiful write. I'd say more, but I'm procrastinating on that paper so that I could check your poetry. :D
Love,
Mars |
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Re: hearts in space
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by New_York_Chick on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 06:31:00 AM AEST
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| very pretty =] |
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Re: hearts in space
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 07:01:13 AM AEST
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Hi Nessa .. I know that you posted this in the "Love or Romantic" category
but I can't help but feel a certain melancholy awash within your words.
Things like ..
for sooo long then at once alone...,
now separate and panicky; and
alas, ever looking for each the other
wow ... there is so much in this. A beautiful mix of emotions, methinks.
A wonderful myriad of passion to ponder.
~Breezy
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Re: hearts in space
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 10:11:19 AM AEST
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Nessa~
You are definately on a roll girl and boy am I glad you're back here and once again posting your wonderful poetry for us to read and enjoy. Hmm I see a bag of mixed emotions in this one hun. Beautiful yet sad in some ways. I loved it. Thanks for sharing it with us Nessa~
love & hugs,
sue m |
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Re: hearts in space
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by derb on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 12:20:52 PM AEST
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| wow. i had to visit your site and read some poetry. wonderful. |
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Re: hearts in space
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by venkat on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 03:41:21 PM AEST
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Dearest Nessa, I am glad you are back here.
This is a wonderful poem..just those hearts in space are cascading timelessly...wow wonderful discriptin.. hugs and love :-) venkat
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Re: hearts in space
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by emystar on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 06:24:47 PM AEST
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Girlfriend,
You do gots it going on with your writing.
Awesome.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: hearts in space
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 17th April 2007 @ 08:57:39 AM AEST
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well Nessa, just go ahead and break my heart! this is sad, now you got to write me how the universe halted for one brief moment and they found each other again..lol!
beautiful work. Vincent |
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Re: hearts in space
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by needledancing on
Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 10:51:52 PM AEST
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| The essence of love written so beautifully and complete. The loss...yes a constant search to be that complete once again. Excellent piece. |
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Re: hearts in space
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by colinb on
Monday, 7th July 2014 @ 04:52:50 PM AEST
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| Thankyou a journey of mixed emotions |
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Re: hearts in space
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 1st November 2014 @ 02:19:19 PM AEST
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Every heart should have a home...Neither time nor space can separate two hearts that have become one. I like the format you used to express yourself.
~Scorp |
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Re: hearts in space
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 3rd September 2020 @ 12:18:49 AM AEST
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I/'/m with Scorp...
Great writing as usual. |
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