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Dreams
Contributed by
kathy
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Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If I could give you your dreams inside a box,
And make you feel like you never felt a loss.
Then I'd hand them to you on a silver plate,
But I know that I'd only be messing with you fate.
For God's the only one who knows what's in his plan,
He's always had your life in the palm of his hands.
It is with faith and paitence that your wishes will come true,
So with all my love I hand your dreams back to you.
Copyright ©
kathy
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2003-02-26 12:00:00]
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Re: Dreams
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by invitroidea on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 01:15:47 PM AEST
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| Its good but you spell lose without two o's and patience like that. It's got rhythm and gives the good word clearly |
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Re: Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 01:16:01 PM AEST
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| Its good but you spell lose without two o's and patience like that. It's got rhythm and gives the good word clearly |
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Re: Dreams
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by kathy on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 04:21:31 PM AEST
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Sorry about the mistakes missed them when I checked. Hope you liked the poem though. Sometimes the fingers go faster than the brain.
Kathy |
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Re: Dreams
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 05:44:09 PM AEST
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That's so beautiful...
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 07:03:05 AM AEST
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| This poems amazing i loved it and to tell the truth - i didnt even notice the spelling mistakes until i read the other comments. I get like that with a few of my poems, mostly forgetting to capatalise! A great write kathy, keep writing. |
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Re: Dreams
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by WordPoet on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 10:43:06 PM AEST
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A selfless soul, in one breath you provide both hope and gentle guidance.
Inspirational write. |
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