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DEAD
Contributed by
BEE
on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 11:42:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Dead
Seeing these deep holes filled
Of these
Corpse of dead bodys
Found Desimated into a grave
Thinking
Did they need this
Did they want this
Why did this crime happen
Feeling this tense body
Lay dead
Before they drop it 10 feet deep
Knowing that's the last
Final
Never see hear or speaks again
Droped to the bottom of your mind
Forgot all about
Cleared
Soul less
Copyright ©
BEE
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2007-04-15 11:42:54]
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Re: DEAD
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by raging_bull13 on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 03:37:52 AM AEST
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| i guess i see what your saying but the end makes no sence to me. maybe i just dont understand what your getting at |
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Re: DEAD
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 04:06:52 PM AEST
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powerfully chilling.
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: DEAD
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 05:24:57 AM AEST
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a very interesting piece.. well written good job
vampyress Jenni |
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