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How do you feel about that?
Contributed by
detourchick
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Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 10:42:35 AM in AEST
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How do you feel about that?
By jess
Trapped in a room with neutral colors
Strapped down to a tacky couch
Forced to spill inner thoughts
Dreams and ideas written in a judge-mental notebook
Pamphlets frightening you with diagnoses
Papers stuffing pills down your throat
Windows showing freedom and life are
Closed and blinded
Seconds seem to pass as hours
The clock torturing you
How do you feel about that?
Time consumes your body
But your mind still races
Reading over the answers you plan to give
Protecting your true self
Longing for disruption in
This placid experience
Dust particle slowly makes its way towards you
Teasing you with direction un-catch-able it whispers in your ear
It is surreal and unnerving the uselessness you feel
The room paralyzes you into an uncontrollable state
The then clock strikes 5
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2007-04-15 10:42:35]
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Re: How do you feel about that?
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by needledancing on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 11:18:17 AM AEST
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| An interesting piece which captures your moments and thoughts during this event of helplessness. Well done |
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Re: How do you feel about that?
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 12:38:15 PM AEST
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i held my breath the whole poem and breathed out at the end, a sigh of relief...which is exactly how it affected me, like i was escaping something... {not your poem!}
love n' hugs nessa |
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