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Wrinkles of the Heart (She's so lost on moving on)
Contributed by
Franciswolf
on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 06:50:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It was the old once upon a time ago
With the winter hearts and the stinging snow
A fleeting feeling for a chance to grow
The ballad of time and the circus show
Wondering, are you a robber if you live just to steal?
If what you take seems like all that’s real?
Pray
Tell me your name
Are you part of a game?
And where’d you get that scar?
Say
Say you love me today
Try to show me the way
If you think that I can make, it can’t be that hard
Wrinkles of the Heart
So overused it starts to carve
So under loved it starts to starve
So lacking life it beats a drift
So done dreaming it begins to shift
Plane tickets, written lover’s names inscribed
Romance’s antics, no satisfaction derived
You’re so left alone, how do you survive?
I’m guessing you’re living but you’re not alive
And it was written by a Beautiful Catastrophe
That the last time she was happy, was last she loved me
No
Keep refusing to go
I’m denying to grow
Into this argument, read and put a shelf
This
It was never ignorant bliss
It just is what it is
You were just happy, till you didn’t let yourself
And where is my heart? O Where is my heart?
Amongst the memories abounds the start
There’s my heart
Where is your mind? Where’d you put your mind?
Some place you can’t see called reality
Where’s my mind?
Reality
Real, Steel Reality
Wrinkles of the Heart
So overused it starts to carve
So under loved it starts to starve
So lacking life it beats a drift
So done dreaming it begins to shift
Copyright ©
Franciswolf
... [
2007-04-15 06:50:56]
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Re: Wrinkles of the Heart (She's so lost on moving on)
(User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 07:12:21 AM AEST
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It's been ages since I commented on anything...or even read anything, for that matter. Today, I decided to start reading poetry on site again, and was apprehensive... there has not really been anything to catch my eye, here, for a long time. (At least, not past the ones I will always and have always, read.) But I'm so glad I came here today.
A wonderful write. The flow is good, and it all bends together very well, as well as being thought inducing, and creative. Some of it made fantastic sense.
Well done, I am very impressed. And thankyou, for renewing my faith in the poetry here on site.
*hugs*
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Re: Wrinkles of the Heart (She's so lost on moving on)
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 07:27:25 AM AEST
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Wonderful job poet! The metaphors and discriptions here are enormous and you are obvioulsy deeply talented. I definitely believe you more than accomplished your intention based on your author's note. Quite a wonderful job, again!
BRAVO!
- SCM |
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Re: Wrinkles of the Heart (She's so lost on moving on)
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 02:23:40 PM AEST
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wow and wow... beautifully written!
love n' hugs nessa
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