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Wilted
Contributed by
ivoryA
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Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 04:26:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am a wilted flower
my color has faded away
the past haunts me
forever etched in my skin
i have been plucked from my bed
ripped from my core
no longer able to enrich myself
and breath in my life
anger ebbs through me
surging in my veins
i have only one emotion left
forever, my feeling of emptiness
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2007-04-15 04:26:50]
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Re: Wilted
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 05:02:13 AM AEST
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i wrote a poem similar to this, called "forgotten"
but i like yours better!
great metaphor, and imagery, i love it!
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Re: Wilted
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by steffygoesrawr13 on
Tuesday, 6th April 2010 @ 08:10:51 PM AEST
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great write (:
I love when a writer puts a simple twist on an object viewed specifically in a way in society.
Like your example of the flower most think of as beautiful and the dark side it can have as well.
(: amazing |
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