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Between Two Mirrors
Contributed by
clarity_rising
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Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 02:13:51 AM in AEST
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Shattered, a thousand broken shards,
Were you always like this?
No, I used to whole and complete.
But how did you break?
Oh, like many fragile things,
I was dropped and forgotten,
No love or compassion can
Fix scars that will never heal.
But I was broken once too you know,
And my scars have disappeared.
No, no, you misunderstand
You were just mistreated.
When you are broken,
You will never be whole again.
Never?
Never,
That is why you must take heed,
Our souls are glass.
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clarity_rising
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Re: Between Two Mirrors
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by Dom on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 02:45:05 AM AEST
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I liked the sense of conversation in this poem, it could be between two people, or for me it feels as if a past self is talking to the present self that is older and has, regretfully not learned from its mistakes because it has made them again, but worse this time.
I loved the opening line because it is straight to the point and makes the reader want to continue.
A wonderful read,
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Re: Between Two Mirrors
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 02:51:52 AM AEST
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Very emotional and with great sense of meaning in between every verse.
FRANCO.
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Re: Between Two Mirrors
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 08:09:34 AM AEST
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I love the simplicity in this, but also how creatively simple it is. That is, sometimes, something very hard to achieve.
I really like this, it's interesting, and relatable, and familiar. The words work well together, without making it over-used and unoriginal.
Great write, I like it.
*hugs*
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Re: Between Two Mirrors
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 07:47:02 PM AEST
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Hey M~
It's so good to see a new post by you my dear friend. Where have you been hiding?
I have missed you around here and I have
also missed your amazing poetry too.
An emotive poem with each verse penned perfectly with emotions one can easily relate to. Please do not stay away for too long next time. It's great to see you posting again M~
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: Between Two Mirrors
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 06:43:06 AM AEST
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exquisite writing
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Between Two Mirrors
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by trueecho on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 09:36:51 AM AEST
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what starts as sad ends as reflective..beautiful
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