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Crying
Contributed by
kazzy1231
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Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 10:25:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Once again I'm crying.
As normal I feel like dying.
I look around but nobody is there.
As always there's nobody to care.
I've been brave this time not taking the knife.
But I really do want to take my life.
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kazzy1231
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2007-04-14 22:25:07]
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Re: Crying
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 01:05:18 AM AEST
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It is deeply moving emotional short poem,
my friend by taking a knife or life is not the Solution to solve life's problem but to face them like a true soldier.
take care my friend.
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Re: Crying
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 10:50:02 AM AEST
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it seems like everyone writes about crying, and most poetry seems depressing. i guess it's easier to write about. (i myself have written more then one 'crying' poem)
nevertheless, great write. very depressing, but a lot of good poetry is. very dark, but also great.
- Bethani - |
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