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To Gaze at Me and Feel Amazed
Contributed by
alasdaircairns
on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 07:34:29 PM in AEST
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She stumbled on my life, surprise,
And now I'm longing for those eyes,
To gaze at me and feel amazed,
Two lovers drifting through the haze.
I'm longing for the day that I,
Can softly sing her lullabies,
And as I stroke her pretty head,
I thank the skies she's in my bed.
Such happy thoughts they make me smile,
Cos I'll be with her in a while,
I'll fall asleep all wrapped in her,
As from this feeling, can't defer.
She's opened up a part of me,
A part I thought I'd never see,
Restored my faith in fate's true touch,
I'm falling for this girl so much...
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alasdaircairns
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2007-04-14 19:34:29]
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Re: To Gaze at Me and Feel Amazed
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by Lovingangel4u on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 11:10:43 PM AEST
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Cute poem. I hope things work out for you both.
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Re: To Gaze at Me and Feel Amazed
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 05:12:15 AM AEST
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strong write, so passionatly beautiful:)
hugs n' love
nessa |
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Re: To Gaze at Me and Feel Amazed
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 08:30:05 AM AEST
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Aww, I think this is really sweet, I love how much emotion and thankfulness there is in this poem. You are both lucky to have found one another.
I do have one suggestion, however, albeit a small one... write 'cause, instead of cos, because it reads better, and looks more... correct, and professional.
But that's all. That one spelling, is the only think I can point out. Wonderful write. I love the cuteness.
*hugs*
Phyllis xxx |
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Re: To Gaze at Me and Feel Amazed
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 02:57:31 PM AEST
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| awww such a sweet write i am sure she will love this. |
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