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The death of you
Contributed by
runawaynameless
on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 12:09:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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all in all,
were all alone,
crawling on the walls,
scarred by the light
all in all,
were all alone
sitting in the corner,
hoping and wishing,
you would have been real
all in all,
were all alone,
comdemned by your madness,
suffer from the passed,
the grave yards where you find me,
death is where you last
all in all,
were all alone,
your wish came true,
you are a god now,
immortal in your death,
yet still killing people
all in all,
we are what we are.
Your death was never tragic,
it was the release I was hoping for
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runawaynameless
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2007-04-14 12:09:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The death of you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 07:35:54 AM AEST (User
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WOW! A potent and striking work poet! Quite a defiant yet somehow compelling work. You seem to have an enormous gift here and I will be looking to read more of you. I am not sure all will take this and admire this for what I believe (hope I am not asumming too much) is actually a much more vague piece than some will take it. The subject of this write seems to be left completely open to the reader which allows the reader to let this death resemble whatever in their life they need a release from.
Whether or not this was your intention, this was my interpretation and I was highly impressed with your art, poet! Brilliant job and looking forward to more from you!
BRAVO! BRAVO!
- Daniel
(who enjoys a dark work when it is done so properly. Immensely enjoys it!) |
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