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My mortality
Contributed by
randyjohnson
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Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 06:32:00 AM in AEST
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Last week I got some very disturbing news.
I have lung cancer and my life is something I'm going to lose.
In less than a year I'll be deceased.
I'll have a tombstone that says Rest in peace.
I smoked three packs of cigarettes everyday for over two decades.
Now I'm about to lose everything and I really am afraid.
I died a little more with each cigarette that I lit.
If you're a smoker, you really should quit.
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randyjohnson
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2007-04-14 06:32:00]
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Re: My mortality
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 10:46:04 AM AEST
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this is almost funny...just because of the last line.
"...you really should quit"
but anyway...i love this poem, and you got your point across so that's all that matters.
love it.
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Re: My mortality
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by TheDevas on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 01:39:27 PM AEST
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| That's a really good poem, I like it. :) It's humorous and catchy. |
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