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The Shadow
Contributed by
honey56
on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 05:04:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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As I sit a top the mountain peak..
Gathering my thoughts,
Looking toward the setting of the
Sun,
As the stars, crown the sky…
The fields of meadows gaze
Into yonder land,
Murmuring shadows toil from
All the days of strife,
Chilled by the dew amidst the
Air..
The shadow bows and hurries
Alone their way,
Crying out fare thee well, oh
Fare thee well,
Tis another night I shall seek
And find all well,
Sitting, looking down from the
Top of the mountain peak..
I say to thee,
Oh fare thee well!
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honey56
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2007-04-14 05:04:40]
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Re: The Shadow
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by Rhei76 on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 05:24:47 AM AEST
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| Nicely written, beautifuly sad |
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Re: The Shadow
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 01:36:00 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed how the form slows you down to think about whats being said |
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Re: The Shadow
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by Dom on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 06:26:14 PM AEST
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The images you have used are beautifully poignant and complement the meaning brilliantly.
I really enjoyed reading this,
Dom |
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Re: The Shadow
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 02:37:44 AM AEST
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It is a brilliant blend of nature and emotion, enjoy reading every line in this poem
wonderfully penned
FRANCO. |
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Re: The Shadow
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 06:34:22 AM AEST
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beautifully written!
love n' hugs nessa |
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