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A Locket Made Of Moonlight . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 03:37:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This
place this place
where might it be?
known otherwise as
you and
me,
a
place
we share
a love so true,
my heart has come
to know as
you.
A
place called you
i'll not deceive where you
shall always know, for who but angels
would beleive how much i love you
so.
This
place called you
i know so well like flowers
know the rain, that part of me
in which you dwell known as your
domain.
That
place you touch as soft as night
where our love goes to sleep, in a locket
made of moonlight your kisses i will
keep.
Oh
come my love
and stay awhile get to know
this place, bring along that lovely
smile you wear upon your
face.
The
part of me
where you were born
i call eternity, where dreams and wishes
meet at dawn like lovers by the
sea.
This
place this place
where can it be that
harbor's love so true,
that if my heart had eyes to see
would see but only
you.
Ben
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2007-04-14 03:37:03]
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Re: A Locket Made Of Moonlight . . . Ben
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by brew on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 12:50:38 PM AEST
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Um WOW......my adopted dad.........just WOW. she will love that one.......like melting butter in ones hands.....
Brew~ |
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Re: A Locket Made Of Moonlight . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 03:22:13 PM AEST
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Beautifull write, my friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: A Locket Made Of Moonlight . . . Ben
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 11:25:33 PM AEST
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| Indeed an absolutely polished and tenderized piece of beauty. Well penned. |
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Re: A Locket Made Of Moonlight . . . Ben
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 08:25:01 PM AEST
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Wow Ben I was simply drawn in by the title and the poem itself is a most romantic and beautifully penned masterpiece. Your poems are so inspiring and they warm the readers heart. Enchanting, magical and beautiful as always. One just melts and gets all *mushy* lol after reading your lovely poems Ben.
Your beautiful wife will absolutely adore this one~ Well done Ben and thanks so much for sharing it with us.
love n hugs ur fan/friend,
sue m |
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Re: A Locket Made Of Moonlight . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 06:37:02 AM AEST
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Ben, this was so very gentle and tender. Like the kiss
of an angel, I would imagine to be.
Exceptionally delicate and beautifully written, my friend.
Your heart is a cavern of romantic emotion, and I am
happy that you have chosen to share even a small
part with us here. It stills the heart as a bird's spring song.
Lovely.
~Breezy |
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Re: A Locket Made Of Moonlight . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 19th April 2007 @ 04:44:16 AM AEST
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awwww, so sweet and beautiful...
love n' hugs nessa |
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