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July
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 04:59:49 PM in AEST
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Editor's note: I was given the word hippo to make a poem out of, this is what came and my children loved it. btw I see "July" as being purple.
I have a huge hippo
she is just the best
I won the sweet darling
in a hollering contest.
Her name is July
cause that's the month she was born
My crazy hippo
she loves to eat corn.
I'm so glad I have her
she really is quite neat
the only problem is...
finding shoes for her feet.
Penned 3-16-07
Laura Horner
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Re: July
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by twick on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 05:06:42 PM AEST
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| this was cute and fun. |
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Re: July
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by emystar on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 05:33:19 PM AEST
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Very good girl.
So why ain't you writing the book?
Huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: July
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 11:30:36 PM AEST
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| Absolutely priceless...I love childrens poems as you well know..get to putting up that book now..Great job. |
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Re: July
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 13th April 2007 @ 01:47:39 AM AEST
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Now that is the way to start a day ... images of shoe shopping for a purple hippo !!!
Thanks for the chuckles, Laura. I needed that !!!
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: July
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Friday, 13th April 2007 @ 03:57:26 AM AEST
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Laura, that is completely adorable.
Thanks for bring out the kid in me.
Peace & Love
~Shannon |
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Re: July
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by Crow on
Friday, 13th April 2007 @ 05:28:33 AM AEST
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o` hell yes! I voted twice for this...lol
I`m a kid at heart..Vincent |
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Re: July
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th April 2007 @ 08:59:34 AM AEST
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Laura, this was so adorable. And what child
wouldn't love a story about a purple hippo??
lol
This was complete fun. Exactly as it should be. :)
*hugs*
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Re: July
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by derb on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 10:58:28 AM AEST
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| I'm browsing around and I'm glad I stopped here. Nicely written and funny too. |
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Re: July
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 05:33:36 AM AEST
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~:*sweet*:~
hugs n' love
nessa |
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Re: July
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 17th April 2007 @ 02:32:28 PM AEST
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Awww Laura that is so cute :)
You write the cutest and nicest things.
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Re: July
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by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 02:18:07 AM AEST
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Yes, I can see it in a children's book. It sure made me smile. Have you done one for each animal? That would be something to buy for my great grandchildren.
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Re: July
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th April 2007 @ 10:12:06 PM AEST
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I can help you here...if you need shoes for your hippo have you tried...shoes4hooves.com? (ok i'll shut up!) bet there is a site called that though.
Beautiful write Doris an enjoyable read i'm sure children of all ages will appreciate this one.
J. |
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Re: July
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th April 2010 @ 01:53:28 AM AEST
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lol, cute Laurabeam!!!!  |
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