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waking up
Contributed by
rhei76
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Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 03:45:04 PM in AEST
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Oh, the world seems to shine.
Reguardless of all the gloom, that totes on my mind.
Sometimes has changed to sun light, and I can not sleep,
I just want to bask...
When feelings are feelings I will wait til tomorrow, Hope and believe they will stay,
I believe everything I say, and trust in what she thinks.
If the rain never clears, I still saw the light for a few days,
I don't know what it means, but I won't forget how it feels.
Like there is a reason to smile, something to think,
the notion of having someone to reflect off
"Would she say this is cool? Would she be okay with this?
I won't offend her with this? wait I can't do that, she will kill me."
Oh, my darkness seems to glow. All my thoughts a positive radiant flow,
like whatever happens in the end I still know.
I lived all my life just to feel.
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Re: waking up
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 04:15:15 PM AEST
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| This was an Excellent poem. I loved the flow of this, great job! |
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Re: waking up
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 11:36:11 PM AEST
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| This is a wonderful write of a mindset that can see a calm in all around them even sad days and still have an optomistic view. The love of being able to feel and enjoy their own feelings a wonderful positive write thoroughly enjoyed by this reader. |
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Re: waking up
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by Crow on
Friday, 13th April 2007 @ 05:21:15 AM AEST
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I agree, the write is matter-of fact. I really enjoyed this work.
"If the rain never clears, I still saw the light for a few days,"
very cool line" Vincent |
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Re: waking up
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th April 2007 @ 09:13:56 AM AEST
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rhei, that last line is fabulous! And well said.
This has such a nice, I-don't-know-what-the-future-holds-but-I'm-enjoying-the-now
feel to it. I wish more would embrace life with that kind of sentiment. 'Tis sad that so many
are given the opportunity, yet seem to never appreciate it. You captured a fine point here,
my friend.
Great post!
~Breezy |
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Re: waking up
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 02:46:22 PM AEST
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lovely:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: waking up
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 10:23:09 PM AEST
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Brillant. This was a well crafted poem. You did a great job writing this. Beautiful.
Take care
Christina |
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