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Empty Now
Contributed by
ediii
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Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 04:59:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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The months I spent on spilling out
all those things so deep inside
passed so fast and not knowing how
I reached the place in which I hide.
I found resentment, opposition
-the only part of Self that stayed.
Dumbly brainwashed composition
with parts of coolness cut out in rage
Like an army, like a unit!
Lust for blood was oh-so met.
They came in, bit it, slit it, hit it,
and ripped out all that they could get.
So now I'm left here, naive and brainless
with no records of what I've learned
Blank wiped conscience, stranded, helpless.
a little girl with no regret.
To sum it up- What did I learn?
Things so easy to resolve all seem.
I yell and cry with no concerns
as the violence of sobriety makes me scream.
Copyright ©
ediii
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2007-04-12 04:59:12]
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Re: Empty Now
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 06:38:22 AM AEST
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The first step of many ....
Wonderfully expressed, I wish you luck and above all I wish you PEACE.
*Hugs*
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Re: Empty Now
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by emystar on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 01:37:42 PM AEST
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This is very sad but well written. I'll pray for you.
luv, big huggs, prayer,
emy |
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